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--- grabar:annotated_close_reading:agathangelos_history:pilot:sec006:s005 [2026/09/23] – §6 S005: adjudicate finite/nonfinite inventory, negative-positive contrast, command/coercion phrases, and textual sea-of-history metaphor mcpuser
+++ grabar:annotated_close_reading:agathangelos_history:pilot:sec006:s005 [2026/09/23] (現在) – §6 S005: remove duplicate trailing review block caused by interrupted/resumed write; preserve authoritative CLOSED analysis mcpuser
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 **Close note:** CLOSED は永久 freeze ではない。後続文・新証拠により revision する場合は、理由を分析履歴へ記録し、黙って採用分析を差し替えない。
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.001 — finite inventory — RESOLVED WITH LEMMA RESIDUAL |
-**finite candidates:** [14] ''հոսեցաք'', [25] ''նաւեցաք''。
+===== Post-close maintenance record =====
-**evidence**
+-09-23: tool interruption / resume により CLOSED record 後へ REVIEW.001–008 の重複ブロックが追記されたため、先行する authoritative Review.001–010 → pre-close → full-domain → close 系列と照合し、重複 tail のみ除去した。採用分析・residual inventory・試訳・close gate の内容変更はない。
-  * morphology service: [14] = AOR.IND.1PL, compatible with ''Հոսեմ'' and ''Հոսիմ''。
-  * CALFA ''Հոսիմ, եցայ'' = “to rush on; to fling / precipitate / fall”, fitting the intransitive use without an overt object。
-  * CALFA ''Հոսեմ, եցի'' can also be intransitive “flow, fall, rush”; therefore lemma-level ambiguity is real。
-  * morphology service: [25] ''նաւեցաք'' = ''Նաւեմ'' AOR.IND.1PL high-confidence。
-  * [12] ''անկանել'' = INF；[17] ''ընթացեալ'' and [24] ''դիմեալ'' are past-participial/nonfinite forms。
-**ADOPTED:** explicit finite centers = **2**:
-  * [14] ''հոսեցաք'' AOR.IND.1PL — ''Հոսիմ'' primary, ''Հոսեմ'' viable lexical alternative。
-  * [25] ''նաւեցաք'' AOR.IND.1PL — ''Նաւեմ''。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED WITH NON-BLOCKING LEMMA RESIDUAL.**
-++++
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.002 — negative arm [5–14] — RESOLVED WITH EXPLICIT INTERNAL RESIDUAL |
-**Primary structure**
-<code>
-[5] ոչ
-  ↓ negates [14] հոսեցաք and its modifiers
-[6] յանդգնութեամբ  INSTR.SG
-    “from / with audacity, presumption”
-[7] տղայաբար  ADV
-    “childishly”
-[8] բարուք     INSTR.PL
-[9] ինչ       postpositive indefinite
-    “with some childish disposition / impulse”
-[10–12] ի ներքս անկանել
-        INF complex “to fall / plunge inward”
-[13] անմտաբար
-     “foolishly, rashly”
-[14] հոսեցաք
-     “we rushed / plunged”
-</code>
-**evidence**
-  * CALFA ''Յանդգնութիւն'' = audacity, rashness, temerity, presumption。
-  * ''Տղայաբար'' = childishly。
-  * ''Բարք'' = manners, disposition, inclination; its entry explicitly notes instrumental/adverbial uses approaching “willingly, spontaneously”。
-  * HMB2018 §18 notes postposed monosyllabic pronouns including ''ինչ''; [9] naturally gives indefinite force to [7–8]。
-  * CALFA ''Անմտաբար'' = foolishly, rashly, inconsiderately。
-  * HMB2018 has a direct phraseological/syntactic parallel **''ի ներքս անկանել''** “to fall/go inward”。
-**ADOPTED reader-facing:**
-**「向こう見ずな大胆さや、何か子供じみた衝動から、愚かにも奥へ飛び込んだのではない」**。
-**NON-BLOCKING internal residual:** [6] and [7–9] may be read as two parallel cause/manner adjuncts or as a more tightly bundled characterization of one rash childish disposition。No overt coordinator decides the finer packaging。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED WITH EXPLICIT NON-BLOCKING RESIDUAL.**
-++++
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.003 — ''ոչ ... այլ ...'' contrast — RESOLVED |
-**structure**
-<code>
-ոչ  [5–14]
-“not ... did we rush inward”
-այլ [16–29]
-“but ... we sailed ...”
-</code>
-The contrast is proposition-level and links two 1PL finite centers:
-  * negative arm [14] ''հոսեցաք''
-  * positive arm [25] ''նաւեցաք''
-Semantically, S005 denies **voluntary rash initiative** and asserts **unwilling, commanded, coerced undertaking**。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED.**
-++++
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.004 — [16–24] unwilling / commanded participial chain — RESOLVED |
-<code>
-[16] ակամայ
-     “unwillingly / involuntarily”
-[17] ընթացեալ  PAST.PTCP
-     shared subject = [4] մեք / 1PL
-     “having gone / proceeded”
-      ├─ [18–19] ըստ հրամանացն
-      │   “according to the commands”
-      └─ [20–23] ի բռնութենէ հարկապահանջ իշխանացն
-          “under / from the compulsion of exacting authorities”
-[24] դիմեալ  PAST.PTCP from Դիմեմ primary
-     shared subject = 1PL
-     “having set toward / made for”
-        ↓
-[25] նաւեցաք
-     “we sailed”
-</code>
-**evidence**
-  * CALFA ''Ակամայ'' = involuntarily, by force, reluctantly。
-  * CALFA ''Ընթանամ'' = go, depart, proceed; past-participial ''ընթացեալ'' is semantically straightforward。
-  * CALFA ''Դիմեմ'' = run/go toward, make for, have recourse; [24] fits directional “having made for / set course”。
-  * [17] and [24] share the overt 1PL discourse subject [4] and precede finite [25], a normal adverbial past-participial chain。
-**ADOPTED:** both [17] and [24] are morphologically past participles with circumstantial/adverbial syntactic function; do **not** posit a separate converb morphology。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED.**
-++++
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.005 — ''ըստ հրամանացն'' — RESOLVED |
-**morphology / government**
-  * [18] ''ըստ'' preposition。
-  * [19] ''հրամանացն'' GEN/DAT/ABL.PL surface；**DAT.PL primary**。
-**evidence**
-  * HMB2018 §159 explicitly states **''ըստ + DAT'' = according to / in conformity with** and gives ''Ըստ այսմ օրինակի ...''。
-  * HMB corpus itself includes a historical-narrative example **''ըստ հրամանացն պատմեսցուք''**。
-**ADOPTED:** **「命令に従って／命令どおりに」**。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED.**
-++++
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.006 — ''ի բռնութենէ հարկապահանջ իշխանացն'' — RESOLVED WITH LEXICAL-REGISTER RESIDUAL |
-**Primary structure**
-<code>
-[20] ի
-  └─ [21] բռնութենէ ABL.SG
-      “from / under compulsion”
-       └─ [23] իշխանացն GEN.PL.DEF
-           “of the authorities/rulers”
-           └─ [22] հարկապահանջ
-              preposed lexical modifier
-              “exacting / tribute-demanding”
-</code>
-**evidence**
-  * CALFA ''Բռնութիւն'' = force, violence, constraint; examples include ''ի բռնութենէ ...''。
-  * ''Հարկապահանջ'' = exacter, tax-gatherer, collector; the dictionary explicitly cites the collocation **''հարկապահանջ իշխանք''**。
-  * HMB2018 §178 permits a preposed polysyllabic modifier to remain uninflected, supporting invariant [22] before oblique plural [23]。
-**ADOPTED:** **「要求を課す／徴求する権威者たちの強制によって」**。
-**NON-BLOCKING lexical-register residual:** literal fiscal “tax-exacting rulers” vs broader contextual “demanding/exacting authorities”。Because S002–S005 center on imposed commands, reader-facing translation uses the broader “要求を課す権威者たち” while lexical notes retain the fiscal/exaction sense。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED WITH EXPLICIT NON-BLOCKING RESIDUAL.**
-++++
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.007 — ''ի մատենայած ծովուս պատմութեան'' — RESOLVED WITH EXPLICIT METAPHOR RESIDUAL |
-**Primary structure**
-<code>
-[26] ի
-  └─ [28] ծովուս  DAT.SG primary under ի
-      “in this sea”
-       ├─ [27] մատենայած
-       │   preposed uninflected adjective
-       │   “book-roaming / immersed in books”
-       └─ [29] պատմութեան GEN.SG
-           “of history”
-</code>
-**evidence**
-  * HMB2018 §156: ''ի'' governs DAT / ACC / ABL; **''ի + DAT'' expresses location**。
-  * morphology service gives [28] ''ծովուս'' GEN/DAT possibilities after the final -ս article/clitic; under [26] ''ի'', DAT.SG is structurally natural。
-  * [29] ''պատմութեան'' is the regular GEN.SG of ''Պատմութիւն'' “history, narration”。
-  * CALFA ''Մատենայած'' = “immersed in study or in books, well versed in literature” and cites Agathangelos **''մատենայած ծովուս''**。
-  * lexical components reinforce the image: ''մատեան'' = book/manuscript; ''Յածիմ'' = roam, wander, travel。
-  * HMB2018 §178 supports an uninflected preposed polysyllabic adjective before an oblique noun。
-**ADOPTED:** [27] attributively modifies [28], while [29] is the genitive content/domain of “sea”。
-Literal semantic shape:
-**「書物の中をめぐる／文献に分け入った、この歴史の海で」**。
-Reader-facing primary:
-**「文献の広がる、この歴史の海へ／海に」**。
-**NON-BLOCKING metaphor residual:** ''մատենայած'' is semantically unusual when transferred from a learned/person-oriented adjective to ''ծով''。It can be rendered “book-immersed”, “book-ranging”, “literary/textual”, or “filled with books/texts”. Do not collapse it silently to plain “history” alone。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED WITH EXPLICIT NON-BLOCKING RESIDUAL.**
-++++
-++++ AGATH.§6.S005.REVIEW.008 — discourse closure of §6 — RESOLVED |
-[1–4] **''Սոյն աւրինակ եւ մեք''** explicitly returns the general comparison to the authorial first person: **“in the same manner, we too”**。
-Across §6:
-<code>
-S001  we sail from necessity on the “sea of wisdom”
-S002  nobody undertakes such toil without authoritative compulsion
-S003  who would dare to fathom the abyssal sea?
-S004  by contrast, people willingly endure long journeys for their own profit
-S005  therefore we did NOT rush in from rash childish initiative;
-      rather, unwillingly, by commands and coercion,
-      we sailed in the textual sea of history
-</code>
-S005 therefore closes the merchant-voyage analogy by making the target domain fully explicit: **the author's historical/literary undertaking**。
-**STATUS: RESOLVED.**
-++++
-===== Adjudication checkpoint =====
-<code>
-REVIEW.001  RESOLVED + lemma residual
-REVIEW.002  RESOLVED + internal manner residual
-REVIEW.003  RESOLVED
-REVIEW.004  RESOLVED
-REVIEW.005  RESOLVED
-REVIEW.006  RESOLVED + lexical-register residual
-REVIEW.007  RESOLVED + metaphor residual
-REVIEW.008  RESOLVED
-FINITE CENTERS:
-  [14] հոսեցաք  AOR.IND.1PL
-  [25] նաւեցաք  AOR.IND.1PL
-NONFINITE:
-  [12] անկանել INF
-  [17] ընթացեալ PAST.PTCP
-  [24] դիմեալ PAST.PTCP
-CORE CONTRAST:
-  NOT rash/childish voluntary plunge
-  BUT unwilling commanded/coerced sailing
-  in the textual sea of history
-NEXT: save/reload → independent pre-close residual sweep
-</code>
-**STATUS: OPEN — initial Reviews adjudicated; pre-close sweep pending.**